I am finally finishing up chapter 3 with 11 pages of writing.an it is getting in teresting. in chapter two Marcus has a dream:

"My eyes were sewn shut and I was lost in a dream.

I was in a field surrounded by children and strange animals. They all looked so happy playing with each other, not a care in the world. But then a ship flew over head and a horrible feeling filled up inside of me. The sky turned red and everything seemed to go dark. A bright light lifted the shadow of destruction giving everything around me an eerie tone. The towns in the distance suddenly exploded into pillars of fire, and each blast from explosions was carried into the field, destroying all that was in its path. The people that were once around me ran as fast as they could but could not out run the explosions. They turned to ashes and flew away like leaves, their lives being snuffed out like candles. A world once filled with happiness was left in burning debris. Nothing was left."


ok im gonna try to write and finish another novel, even though the last one got lost im gonna try again. i have an idea of what i want only from a game that my friend and i made up and from a few other ideas here and there.

Marcus is a person from another demention and he was sent over as a baby before it was destroyed. In the persent this same character is a graduate from collage and is going on a walk to wait for his friends to pick him up to celebrate. While on the walk he meets a strang man who is rambling about a war that is coming and that Marcus needs to hide. This man tells Marcus that both of them or from the same demention and also tells him about his past and his real name. Soon after the MC leaves there is a murder on TV about that same man. On the body there are unusual burns and cuts...

this is my idea for the prologue and mabye the first couple of chapters...but i still need help and ideas if anyone can please note me.